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Medical appliance by ~radioactivepoo:iconradioactivepoo:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Surreal

©2004-2009 ~radioactivepoo
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Artist's Comments

this is lung. lung belongs to me. pei belongs to wifey, but it is not in this picture. not enough room on my paper :"[

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~trance-orange Dec 17, 2004, 6:24:27 PM
nice comment douche fuck you are banned from wifey now ):
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~ZutaNA Dec 17, 2004, 6:27:09 PM
beautifuuul

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no quiero fotos huerfanas
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~glittercunt Dec 17, 2004, 6:29:17 PM
you wanted advanced critique eh? I'll try my best :ashamed:

At first, I want to say that the deitails and omg, the hair ;_; is fucking awesome. I love it. But yeah critiques, I don't know if it's part of the style, but the body looks very 2D-ish, like it's not rounded at all. And the hand is very small too. Otherwise, I have no complaints whatsoever.

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silence is sexy.
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~radioactivepoo Dec 17, 2004, 6:33:20 PM
thank you for the critique, i have problems with hands, especially in this picture i dont really know wtf happened lma but i didnt really feel like fixing it. i also suck at shading which is why everything looks flat. shhh dont tell.
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~Cosmiksquirel Dec 17, 2004, 6:42:51 PM
this drawing is very nice..i love the hairs and all the stuff she haves on her..
ill agree with glittercunt when she says her hand is too small..
and another thing i could critique is that its pretty sad cuz her hairs got A LOT of details and its a lot darker than the rest of her body so we're attracted to look at her hairs more than anything else...you really should pratice to shade yer stuff ^^ it would look so awesome..

but anyway
the drawing's great ^^ keep it up

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I haved moved! ~Elleir
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~aimlessaimee Dec 17, 2004, 6:44:04 PM
very nice. as mentioned above, the hand. and the fore arm is a little short too.

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~snafus Dec 17, 2004, 7:12:35 PM
THIS IS NOT REALISTIC AT ALL.



I always love how you do hair. It looks like yarn or wool, and I can feel it. Also, I do not believe you when you say you can't shade. I think this one just looks flat since it is uncolored. Yeah. The fingers are too short compared to the rest of its hand. That is pretty much the only thing I can see wrong with it, and it doesn't even matter.
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~mindless-sheep Dec 17, 2004, 7:19:52 PM
did you use a ballpoint pen? or.. or..
intense--
you could work on giving the body more depth to it.. make it less flat looking..
i like the medical appartus, you make it so real and believable
but what i really like in particular is the hair and the head, and the amputated legs and hand. we got an amputee here, yes we do
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~radioactivepoo Dec 17, 2004, 7:21:08 PM
i used technical pens
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